Recording and editing video section is curt, could be expounded

Great patch, thanks. I've applied this to our natty branch.

There are a couple of references to "Ubuntu" in there - they might be intentional and I've left them as such, but please could you check that those shouldn't be to "Xubuntu".

One trivial request - please include the bug number somewhere in your commit messages as well, like this: "LP: #644100". That makes it easier to copy and paste your entries to the changelog in due course when the package is uploaded.

Do you want the bug # inputted along with the rest of the commit message? I thought I was including the bug numbers within the commit message. When I look at the log with Bazaar Explorer I see the references to the bug#'s, and when I enter the command "bzr log -r 209" in a terminal, for example, while in the xubuntu-docs branch it outputs the following:

------------------------------------------------------------
revno: 209
fixes bug(s): https://launchpad.net/bugs/643246 <-------
committer: Matthew East <email address hidden>
branch nick: natty
timestamp: Mon 2010-09-20 08:08:43 +0100
message:
  Update Music section for default apps in xubuntu, LP: #643022, Book 'em Dano

Are you saying that you would like a reference to the bug # with "Update Music...." only or in addition to the "fixes bug(s)" section of the log of commits?

Hi,

On 23 September 2010 23:59, Book 'em Dano <email address hidden> wrote:
> Do you want the bug # inputted along with the rest of the commit
> message?

Yes please. It's not a big deal but it is helpful for when we are
compiling a changelog for the package of all the bugs which have been
fixed.

> I thought I was including the bug numbers within the commit
> message. When I look at the log with Bazaar Explorer I see the
> references to the bug#'s, and when I enter the command "bzr log -r 209"
> in a terminal, for example, while in the xubuntu-docs branch it outputs
> the following:

Right, but that's the commit message which I used when merging your
patches. I added the bug number.

--
Matthew East
http://www.mdke.org
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Accepted xubuntu-docs into lucid-proposed, the package will build now and be available in a few hours. Please test and give feedback here. See https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Testing/EnableProposed for documentation how to enable and use -proposed. Thank you in advance!

Verified the xubuntu-docs are now correct in 10.04.1, using a fresh installation in VirtualBox, fully updated before enabling proposed. Thanks for the hard work getting this done.

This bug was fixed in the package xubuntu-docs - 9.10.1.10.04.1

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xubuntu-docs (9.10.1.10.04.1) lucid-proposed; urgency=low

  [Book 'em Dano]
  * desktop-guide/about-xubuntu/C/about-xubuntu.xml:
    - inputted correct format of command (LP: #653881)
    - changed entity for distro version number
  * desktop-guide/add-applications/C/add-applications.xml:
    - added reference to Ubuntu Software Center & other revisions (LP: #647187)
    - various revisions
    - added appropriate tags, capitalized section titles
    - provided instruction on how to install package using Gdebi, restructured
      appearance of file
  * desktop-guide/administrative/C/administrative.xml: added appropriate tags,
    revised instructions on how to grant/restrict administrative access
  * desktop-guide/basic-commands/C/basic-commands.xml:
    - corrected variable & stdout
    - added appropriate tags, capitalized section titles
  * desktop-guide/config-desktop/C/config-desktop.xml:
    - updated instructions how to enable window effects & change windows themes
      & icons
    - restructured appearance of code; added appropriate tags; commented out
      section pertaining to Menu Editor as it has been removed from Xfce 4.6
    - added appropriate tags, inputted correct entity
    - revised instructions to add and select new theme
  * desktop-guide/games/C/games.xml: added reference to Ubuntu Software Center &
    other revisions (LP: #647187)
  * desktop-guide/hardware/C/hardware.xml:
    - added reference to Ubuntu Software Center & other revisions (LP: #647187)
    - capitalized section titles, updated url for laptop testing & revised
      instructions on how to activate/deactivate restricted/third-party drivers,
      choose a blank screen as screensaver, commented out pm-general-method
      section as it is obsolete (LP: #461158)
  * desktop-guide/index.xml:
    - commented out reference of files-and-docs.xml to remove from "Files,
      Folders and Documents" chapter as it contains nothing other than links to
      other sections (LP: #700347)
    - Commented out this reference as Advanced Topics chapter does not have any
    unique substantive material, (LP: #700351)
  * desktop-guide/internet/C/connecting.xml:
    - added appropriate tags, corrected grammatical errors, added appropriate
      tags, provided full names for acronyms
    - revised instructions on how to connect to Mobile Broadband, VPN and DSL
      connections
  * desktop-guide/internet/C/connecttoserver.xml: changed directions to reflect
    usage of Gigolo (LP: #644867); changed user interaction verbs, changed tags
    & capitalized section titles
  * desktop-guide/internet/C/disconnecting.xml: added appropriate tags
  * desktop-guide/internet/C/information.xml: added appropriate tags
  * desktop-guide/internet/C/networking.xml: capitalized section titles, changed
    tags, provided instructions on how to share folders with Shared Folders
    application
  * desktop-guide/internet/C/nm.xml: added appropriate tags, corrected
    grammatical errors
  * desktop-guide/internet/C/troubleshooting.xml:
    - added appropriate tags, capitalized titles of sections, revised
      in...

This bug was fixed in the package xubuntu-docs - 11.04.0

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xubuntu-docs (11.04.0) natty; urgency=low

  [ Book 'em Dano ]
  * desktop-guide/about-xubuntu/C/about-xubuntu.xml:
    - inputted correct format of command, LP: #653881
    - modified entity/path to access Software Sources through Ubuntu Software
      Center, LP: #649530
    - added tags
  * desktop-guide/add-applications/C/add-applications.xml:
    - added reference to Ubuntu Software Center & other revisions, LP: #647187
    - changed tags to provide consistency
    - added tags & expounded on instruction to install deb file with GDebi
    - corrected tags
    - added appropriate tags, capitalized titles of sections, inputted entity
      for Xubuntu
    - modified entity/path to access Software Sources through Ubuntu Software
      Center, LP: #649530
    - added colon per Style Guide, capitalized section title
  * desktop-guide/administrative/C/administrative.xml:
    - revised instruction on how to add administrative access to user
    - added appropriate tags, revised instructions on how to grant/restrict
      administrative access
    - changed user interaction verbs, changed tags & capitalized section titles
  * desktop-guide/config-desktop/C/config-desktop.xml:
    - added tags, corrected sentence structure
    - added appropriate tags, restructured appearance of file, revised
      instructions on how to enable desktop effects & change desktop themes,
      commented section about Menu Editor as it was removed from Xfce 4.6
    - added colon per Style Guide, capitalized section title
  * desktop-guide/games/C/games.xml: added reference to Ubuntu Software Center &
    other revisions, LP: #647187
  * desktop-guide/hardware/C/hardware.xml:
    - added reference to Ubuntu Software Center & other revisions, LP: #647187
    - revised instructions on how to use Additional Drivers & corrected
      grammatical errors
    - updated instructions & updated url for laptop testing
    - corrected grammatical errors, changed structure of file, added
      instructions to install xfce4-fsguard-plugin, LP: #672217
    - capitalized section titles, commented out pm-general-method section as it
      is obsolete, LP: #461158
  * dkestop-guide/index.xml:
    - commented out reference of files-and-docs.xml to remove "Files, Folders
      and Documents" chapter as it contains nothing other than links to other
      sections, LP: #700347
    - commented out this reference as Advanced Topics chapter does not have any
      unique substantive material, LP: #700351
  * desktop-guide/internet/C/connecttoserver.xml:
    - changed directions to reflect usage of Gigolo, LP: #644867
    - changed user interaction verbs, changed tags & capitalized section titles
  * desktop-guide/internet/C/disconnecting.xml: changed user interaction verbs,
    changed tags & capitalized section titles
  * desktop-guide/internet/C/nm.xml: changed user interaction verbs, changed
    tags & capitalized section titles
  * desktop-guide/internet/C/networking.xml: revised instructions on how to
    allow access to folders over networks, capitalized sections titles,
    restructured appearance of file
  * des...