poor choice of words makes documentation unclear
Bug #473280 reported by
turlocktim
This bug affects 1 person
Affects | Status | Importance | Assigned to | Milestone | |
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ubuntu-docs (Ubuntu) |
Fix Released
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Low
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Bug Description
Binary package hint: ubuntu-docs
in Ubuntu Documentation > Ubuntu 9.10 > Ubuntu Server Guide > Package Management > Automatic Updates
url = https:/
The phrase "Another useful package is apticron. apticron will configure a cron job to email an administrator information about any packages on the system that need updated as well as a summary of changes in each package." seems unclear. Specifically the words "the system that need updated" seem awkward . Do you mean "the system that was updated" or "the system that needed updating"?
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Hi turlocktim, thank you for reporting this. I have patched this in the Lucid development branch in revision 385. It now reads:
Another useful package is apticron. apticron will configure a cron job to email an administrator information about any packages on the system that have updates available, as well as a summary of changes in each package.
I hope that is more clear. Please don't hesitate to report any more problems that you find.