Neither of the URLs you listed starts by stating the problem, imho it would help to the state the goal/impact if you want to get interest in the issue (otherwise people are just going to glance, don't understand the request and close it)
Neither of the URLs you listed starts by stating the problem, imho it would help to the state the goal/impact if you want to get interest in the issue (otherwise people are just going to glance, don't understand the request and close it)