Thanks, it's much better now. However, there are still some remnants which I think need to be updated.
> In a future Launchpad release, projects and distributions will have the option of
> manually expiring old, unattended bugs that have the "Incomplete" status.
This looks like residue from the old version which should simply be taken out now.
> Using these, you'll be able to see which bugs would be expiry candidates if the feature were active.
The future tense here is no longer pertinent.
s/would be expiry candidates if the feature were active/are expiry candidates/
Thanks, it's much better now. However, there are still some remnants which I think need to be updated.
> In a future Launchpad release, projects and distributions will have the option of
> manually expiring old, unattended bugs that have the "Incomplete" status.
This looks like residue from the old version which should simply be taken out now.
> Using these, you'll be able to see which bugs would be expiry candidates if the feature were active.
The future tense here is no longer pertinent.
s/would be expiry candidates if the feature were active/are expiry candidates/