Bug #1071780 “Small English language correction needed around La...” : Bugs : Ubuntu Packaging Guide

Small English language correction needed around Launchpad description

Bug #1071780 reported by Antonio Rosales
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Antonio Rosales

Bug Description

On
http://developer.ubuntu.com/packaging/html/getting-set-up.html

It states:
“Launchpad is the central piece of infrastructure we use in Ubuntu. It not only stores our packages and our code, but also things like translations, bug reports, and information about the people who work on Ubuntu and their team memberships.”

It needs a simple addition of “does.” So the suggestion is:

Launchpad is the central piece of infrastructure we use in Ubuntu. It not only stores our packages and our code, but also _does_ things like translations, bug reports, and information about the people who work on Ubuntu and their team memberships.

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Antonio Rosales (arosales) wrote :

I'll work on proposing a fix.

-Thanks,
Antonio

Changed in ubuntu-packaging-guide:
assignee: nobody → Antonio Rosales (a.rosales)
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Dmitry Shachnev (mitya57) wrote :

> Launchpad ... does things like ... translations, bug reports, and information

I don't really like that phrase. For me this sounds better:

> Launchpad is the central piece of infrastructure we use in Ubuntu. It _stores not only_ our packages and our code, but also things like translations, bug reports, and information about the people who work on Ubuntu and their team memberships.

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